Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You could also write on http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de (AA) were StFan writes too... Thought IMHO would prefer that you continue to stay and post here AS WELL. Since here it's easier to search for the entire fic as on AA, also on AA there are the most unfinished fics then say here since most think that other will continue their work till their work is 'forgotten' like all those others. Though I doubt that will ever happen to your fantastic work. I enjoyed it very much and hope you continue it very soon... If you could... could you add Kiima (Phoenix) Mon-Lon (7 Lucky Gods) as well? Hmm did Ranma learn some 'mokkori' from Ryo Saeba (City hunter) >] That would explain at least some things happening. A little competition would help Ranmas act around others (mostly woman) a lot. Competition like Mamoru and Ryo Saeba. ;) Any good going and please update this and all your other work that I enjoy very much!!!!!!!!!!
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