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| "The Girl With the Raven Hair" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: No One On: August 27, 2002 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so weird... your English isn't that great (an example: dinner is the meal eaten at night; DINER is a restaurant), I hate it when the main character has everything (in this case, psychic powers, wealth, beauty, attention in the new place though ignore at home, the whole nine yards), and it's so not creative. But I would like to know what happens.
...But I doubt I'll find out, because the last update was a year ago... That's what I get for getting into this anime several years too late! | Reviewed By: han On: June 24, 2002 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay you're sentences are a little choppy. u should really try to use more commas. but this is really a really great fic. u should update it, continue whatever. | Reviewed By: Nikki On: November 26, 2001 04:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For one, i luuuuuuved the fic. It's so cool and cute, however, the magical stuff, kinda sounds familiar. Funny, some parts may b, but i really liked it a lot, so please, more, i'd like to know very well what happened next, who end up with who.
Yadda, yadda, yadda. Keep up the terrific works because right now u r doing great! |
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