| "Theives and Demons dont Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: LubHAruka On: April 08, 2005 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i'm reading so many fanfics today....oh well... It was really good so keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 13:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, that was probably the shortest chapter that I have ever read. But it was still really good, for your first time. I think you should add more about what she's thinking and more talking add stuff. It seemed more like a prolouge to me but I still really liked it and I think that you should update.
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