| "Muerte Carcel" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: BEAUTIFUL
Reviewed By: Dragongril On: June 06, 2006 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story it felt like i was actually watch saiyuki series with a whole new storyline. And I wonder when are you going to finish this story, I'm drying to finish it. I would like to know what those quote meant at the beginning of each chapter. 5680
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Reviewed By: yukitok On: November 22, 2005 21:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, here's the thing, I like this story, and I know you said not to say anything, but if you know that you have spelling mistakes, why would you insult the charaters and yourself by leaving them in there? "break" and "brake" should not be messed up...it makes it hard to take you seriously. Also your number system is confusing...I am an artist and have no mind for numbers and it is extremely frustrating to my slightly autistic brain to have to bend to this odd system...give me some way to know them beyond their numbers...it's almost like you're dehumanizing them just like your bad guy is. I'm sorry if you don't like constructive critizim, but you should put on your first page that you don't want reviews if that's what you truely desire. Yuki
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Reviewed By: zaknaf27 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 10:49 CDT
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I remember seeing this fic somewhere else and getting very excited about it. I really wanted to read more but then it disappeared and I couldn't find it anymore. I'm so glad that that it has returned b/c I always wanted to know what happens next. With reading only one chapter previously it became a favorite of mine. Please keep going. Sanzo and Goku don't seem to be too ooc and in any case, I love their portrayal. So anxious to know what happens to Sanzo in the labyrinth. The spelling and grammer are a little distracting, but since the story is so intriguing, who really notices after a while? Please keep up the good work!! Love the story!!!!
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Reviewed By: msky [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 04:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROCKING! LOVE THE STORY! IT IS SO AWESOME! A BETA READER I SUMONE HU CORRECTS THE GRAMMER AND SPELLING RITE? WELL, IF SO, I VOULENTEER. AM MEMBER HERE. MELANIE_SANZO PLZZZZZZZZZZ CONTACT ME THANX
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Reviewed By: anna_chan On: April 04, 2005 16:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! It's my new fav. Keep up the writing!!! Kuddos!
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