Title: coolio! Reviewed By: Lauren or Deragonmaji On: July 15, 2005 10:10 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: HIYA!!!!!!!!! I really love this fic. I've read ALOT of fics and I haven't really seen anything quite like this one. I saw no spelling problems and I like your style of writing. It was a bit confusing in the beginning when Moon and Trance were talking though.... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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