| "What your love means to me" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Geta-Baby [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 02:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
2007 and people are still loving your story. Well you're probably all grown and don't even remember wriiting this but it was just soo good I had to comment on it. It was such a great idea to make it a future time line fic and you actually stuck to the Vegetea cares about her because quite frankly why else would he stay on Earth. To put it bluntly: loved it, made me cry.
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Reviewed By: Baby The Tuffle King On: August 21, 2003 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the saddessed fic I have ever read in my life. I actually did cry at the end. |
Reviewed By: Majin Scott On: August 20, 2003 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the entire story. althouth I was a little freaked out when vegetawas geting raped. It was both interesting very creative. In my opinion you may well have future in writing fiction.
P.S loved it, loved it loved it. |
Reviewed By: girusa On: June 08, 2002 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was fun and exciting to read |
Reviewed By: Hetchi On: April 26, 2002 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cryed CRYED *still crying* but it was a good story. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, but in really isn't in great order. It is like, bread. Butter. Jelly. how does it all go together? I mean I know how it goes together, but can't you have some transitions words? Not a Flame, just the way I feel. Keep up the good work. if you have anything to say to me, you can e-mail me at reginarenee2002@prodigy.net By the way, it was the first fanfic I have ever read, and it inspired me to write fanfics. A million Thanks. |
Reviewed By: mariah On: January 12, 2002 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, you used such nice words, almost poetry. Very good! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: nikki On: January 03, 2002 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!i really enjoyed this story.Keep writing more fanfics. |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2002 21:34 CST
Comment/Review:
oops, i don't think i was suppose to write in the title box. sry. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2002 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(this is not a flame, don't get mad at me)omg, the fic was good, but i don't think i have ever read a sadder fanfic in my life. i was in tears. i love your writing style, you give great descriptions, but i think next time, if i get hooked to one of your fics, i'd prefer to read something less... depressing. you are an excellent writer. i just don't want to cry anymore! lol. next time, try something, with a happy ending. i'm the helpless romantic type. love it though! any fic that can make me cry deserves a standing ovation. (cheers) keep up the good work! looking forward to reading more of your work in the future! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Jes On: December 29, 2001 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought your fic was very well written.Your words were so desrciptive.I really think you should write romance fics more often. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 28, 2001 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was fantastic! Once in a while I like to see if my tear ducts are working. They are. This was a beautiful tear-jerker. Great Job! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: December 28, 2001 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, tear-jerker. I have to say that this is good. Darke Angelus kind of good is you know what I mean....
I pretty much figured out that young Bulma was Vegeta as soon as she/he appeared on the scene. Mannerisms I know well of Vegeta. (looks at last sentence and sighs) sorry, in one of those backwards moods.
You are deifnately going in my fav authors list! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2001 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this like 4 times and I always forget to review. I want you to know that this a very good fic and that I love the twist at the end. |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2001 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O, thats very good, tears were welling in my eyes towards chap 2! :) |
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