| "What your love means to me" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2002 21:34 CST
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oops, i don't think i was suppose to write in the title box. sry. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2002 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(this is not a flame, don't get mad at me)omg, the fic was good, but i don't think i have ever read a sadder fanfic in my life. i was in tears. i love your writing style, you give great descriptions, but i think next time, if i get hooked to one of your fics, i'd prefer to read something less... depressing. you are an excellent writer. i just don't want to cry anymore! lol. next time, try something, with a happy ending. i'm the helpless romantic type. love it though! any fic that can make me cry deserves a standing ovation. (cheers) keep up the good work! looking forward to reading more of your work in the future! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Jes On: December 29, 2001 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought your fic was very well written.Your words were so desrciptive.I really think you should write romance fics more often. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 28, 2001 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was fantastic! Once in a while I like to see if my tear ducts are working. They are. This was a beautiful tear-jerker. Great Job! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: December 28, 2001 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, tear-jerker. I have to say that this is good. Darke Angelus kind of good is you know what I mean....
I pretty much figured out that young Bulma was Vegeta as soon as she/he appeared on the scene. Mannerisms I know well of Vegeta. (looks at last sentence and sighs) sorry, in one of those backwards moods.
You are deifnately going in my fav authors list! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2001 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this like 4 times and I always forget to review. I want you to know that this a very good fic and that I love the twist at the end. |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2001 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O, thats very good, tears were welling in my eyes towards chap 2! :) |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2001 21:28 CST
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this is really different from most V/B fics... i have to admit i had tears in my eyes from the end of part two to part three...and im not the severely sappy type!
keep it up ~ this should only be the beginning to another fic :) |
Reviewed By: ashley On: November 23, 2001 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i really loved this story!! i really got lost in it =). very good =). |
Reviewed By: dbz27 On: November 21, 2001 23:35 CST
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I not into lemons but i thought I would give your story a try since I love V/B fics. It was a beautifully written story!! I almost cried in chapter 2!!! Never stop writing!! |
Reviewed By: Mademoiselle On: November 17, 2001 11:31 CST
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*Wow* That was amazing, you've found a way to stir up the monotonous form of lemon writing. Oh, continue! |
Reviewed By: lydia On: November 18, 2001 05:10 CST
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OMG that is the most incredible lemon that I've ever read! I feel like having a cigarette and I don't even smoke-Whoa Nelly! |
Reviewed By: lydia On: November 18, 2001 05:28 CST
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OK. Now I'm sad. Very sad and crying volumes. You are such an incredible writer. That was beautiful. |
Reviewed By: lydia On: November 19, 2001 02:34 CST
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Great surprise ending to wrap up your trilogy. You are truly a gifted writer. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: November 19, 2001 19:11 CST
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Wow...amazing...I mean, in the first chapter, I was wowed by the lemon, second chapter I was crying...and now I'm just in awe after reading the last chapter. Kudos on an amazing fic. |
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