Reviewed By: DarkShadow jr On: April 04, 2005 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The stories great, it's just the spelling. And the flow. You need to add more detail into each chapters. I do believe you have gone through almost a two month period in like a couple of sentences. Otherwise the story's awesome. If you need help on editing it just talk to me and that's all I'll do promise ^_^
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