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| "Practice" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Crany Ran-chan
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 02:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Thank you for making a cranky Ranmaru and not a Submissive! Ranmaru. Me likey the crank Ran-chan more.
| Title: oryo
Reviewed By: Oryo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 03:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Since it is really hard to find good Kizuna fanfiction, starring Kei and Ranmaru, I'm very glad to have found your story. You have a really good grip on the characters, and your style suits the story very well. The only thing I considered weird was Ranmaru saying "fuck", but at the same time, it felt somewhat right in the context. I hope you continue writing such lovely stories.
| Title: Mauztattoo
Reviewed By: Mauztattoo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have just started on Kizuna and I like your vision very much. The violence of Kei's imaginings is really in character.
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