| "Metamorphosis Alpha" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Lady Shellstar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 19:21 CDT
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n'eh, I feel bad now; i always feel bad when I read G/V (even though they're TOTALLY meant for each other XD) 'cause I think of Bulma and ChiChi (heh, I think the kids could handle it, 'specially since Trunks and Goten are DESTINED FOR EACH OTHER!!), there are times when I REALLY wish they would go for each other so then things would even out, but somehow I don't see either swinging that way....PLEASE RESOLVE YOUR CLIFFIE!!! And throw in some more smexiness for me, eh? AND PLEASE, MAKE THINGS WORK OUT!!! TOO MUCH ANGST AND YOU'LL TURN EMO! Heh, though I wish that upon no one... =EMLY
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Reviewed By: Lady Blaizen On: June 27, 2005 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is coming out great! I felt so bad for Goku, Gohan saying he has no father.. It was a tear tugger. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Blackcat16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really great especially the yaoi scenes and also the notes at the end cuz I didn't some of those words. Plz update sooon
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Reviewed By: majinbulgeta On: April 27, 2005 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT THE FUK IS THE MATTER W/ ME?! 10 OUTTA 10!!!
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Reviewed By: majinbulgeta On: April 27, 2005 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I JUST ENJOYED READIN THIS SOOO MUCH! I LOVE THE WORD FUK...FUK IS AN AWESOME WORD. I USE IT DAILY AND THERES A LOT OF FUK IN THIS STORY...LITERALLY. WONDERFUL LEMONS! AND IM GLAD THESE TWO ARE HITTEN IT OFF! I LOOOVE THE RELATIONS BETWEEN VEGETA, GOKU AND THEIR KIDS! THEY KIK ASS! THEY'RE JUST ALL COOL W/ THEIR DADS SCREWIN EACH OTHER AND BIN GAY. HELL IF THATS HOW MY DAD FELT ID ENCOURAGE^_^ BUT IM STILL GLAD HE ISNT...KREEPY... LOL! LOVES LOTS!
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Reviewed By: 4872 On: April 06, 2005 21:38 CDT
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That chapter is good enough to stand on it's own, but an additional chapter can take it to a whole new level. Stick with this one, it's worth your time.
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Reviewed By: Zack, the Sayajin On: April 06, 2005 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wouldn't dare stop posting, would you? You can't make such thing, it's not fair, we DESERVE to read the rest of it. And which should be very VERY long if you ask me, with lots and lots of sayan smuggness. Don't care and don't mind of others pairings, while you give us plenty of delicious Kaka-Vege yaoi.
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Reviewed By: Mad_elf On: April 06, 2005 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! that is what i call a yimy lemon.what i would do to make vegeta happy. It was a great story, I cant get enought of it.Please,please,please update soon .
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Reviewed By: geta_gfan On: April 05, 2005 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! It is a great story ,cant wait to read more . ~~Please update soon~~
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