| "My Tenkawa!!" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Zero Asakura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi An AkitoXRuri fic!!!!!! update it soon please!
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Reviewed By: someone On: November 28, 2002 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the style of writeing is great.I did have to read alot of stuff over like the end of the prologue I still dont understand that. I never read a Akito and Ruri (I hope tat was the right way to spell her name well you know the one with gold eyes.I realy enjoy reading it please write another chapter.All the stuff is really good. |
Reviewed By: Umi-chan On: November 17, 2001 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. A Nadesico fic. Never thought I'd see the day...just kidding, but I did like the idea. But you write in a confusing sort of way...I had to reread a lot of parts. But the idea is good and that's half the battle. Consider using a beta reader to edit your stuff. If you just polish it a bit...it would be really good! |
