| "What's Simple Is True" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: meljoy On: September 12, 2005 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I like this fic, update soon
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, here's your feedback. PLEASE UPDATE NOW!
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww, Vegeta saved Bulma. And lol about Vegeta's dad's name, VELDOCK. I thought his name was Vegeta? Or are you just using that as a way to tell them apart?
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLOLOL!!!!!!!! "Of course I'm going! And once I return to Vegeta-sei I'm never coming back to this mud ball planet! I will finally fulfill my destiny and become the strongest King Vegeta-sei has ever seen!" Lol that totally cracked me up. And then when Chichi bashed Goku in the head. You actually had him say "Ouchies!" Lol I DIED.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh, me like so far! can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This one's fun! We need more fics with Bardock in them... I hope Raditz will be showing up. A great start!
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Reviewed By: Heiress2thethrone [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS FIC. THIS IS THE FIRST KIND I'VE READ LIKE THIS AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR U TO UPDATE.
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Reviewed By: forever ryoka On: April 15, 2005 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
helloooooo wow what an awsome story! just so you know i reviewed the same story on ff.net today.. and i am begging you please please please update! your story is awsome!
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Reviewed By: wouldn'tyouliketoknow On: April 11, 2005 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh!! Hilarious!!!! I had to gather myself quiet a few times throughout the story, that in itself was was funny.
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Reviewed By: vegetaslindalou On: April 05, 2005 15:32 CDT
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Your story has started out great, I will keep reading as you update, so please do.
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