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Reviewed By: pinak On: October 01, 2005 12:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
do u have to ask if like it or not? OFCOURSE like it. keep going, we r waiting!!
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Reviewed By: FlamingFoxFire On: June 23, 2005 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!! I can't wait to find out what happens!
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Kiyomiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 13:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story (YAY its mostly about kai..And kai FINALLY shows up!!! :) ) Add on or i shall hunt you down and force you to write
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Tyson_O_o On: April 29, 2005 06:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!!!!! Nice
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Title: you gotta death wish?
Reviewed By: courtza On: April 16, 2005 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey thanx for your email. just having a bit of troble with sending reply email. and yeah i would like to keep in touch with you and if it's ok for you i will help give you ideas if it helps or when eva you ask. oh and you have a great talent for writing. you really kow how to bring the emotions out and make the reader feel for the character i can't wait for the next chapter. cya Jenny.
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Title: you gotta death wish?
Reviewed By: courtza On: April 12, 2005 04:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your second chapter it rox!! and just wanted to say it rox. and that i can't wait till chapter 3 comes! so great work and best of luck with the next capter!!
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeeee Kai(sorry slight Kai fan all I do is dream of him, get picks of him, make shrimes for him, dolls, ect.) ok sorry...I like the story sill and keeep up the good work! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job, I love it the best future Beyblade Fanfiction I ever read! Keep up the good work! Ja ne(c-ya in Jap.)
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Title: Kick-ASS!!!
Reviewed By: Bop On: April 05, 2005 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Afterlife, you did an amazing job on this! you have a real talent!I can't wait until the next chapter comes on! It a very emotional chapter and you know exactly how to pull readers in and feel the emotion that the characters are feeling. just one question...is Hillary having twins ~lol~ Keep it coming, its great stuff!
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Title: you gotta death wish?
Reviewed By: courtza On: April 05, 2005 07:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the 1st chpter but i am having trobble getting to the 2nd chapter could you please send the other chapter/s to me? at: queenbitch_2000@hotmail.com thatnx i would be really thankfull but yeah i love wat i have read and would really love to read wat else you have written for this storey. please send the chapters to me PLEASE!!??? i would be really thankful. thanx from courtza.
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