| "Agony & Ecstacy" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Shinari On: September 13, 2005 12:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I want to know what happens next please update
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Title: Please type more! Im enjoying the story.....
Reviewed By: ANglea Battousaii (how im going to reffer myself as of now) ~ang~ On: September 02, 2005 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's sooo much to write about....I love your story soo far....
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Title: Love
Reviewed By: Yami's Lover On: July 21, 2005 22:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's me again, one more thing Yami, I'm going get that KISS and your SEXY BODY no matter what. The sex appealed girl said. From the BIG FAN: Yami's lover (AKA-SEX TOY) P.S.-My appeal for you shall last an enternaty for that SEXY BODY Yami- said the girl know as Yami' lover(AKA-SEX TOY) One more thing, I turly love you, and I know you love me; don't try to denie it Yami my LOVE. ^_^ ^_^
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Title: Love
Reviewed By: Yami's lover On: July 21, 2005 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far your storys are interesing and funny. You should do the three some in the next chapter. That would be someything interesing to read as I listen to my Marron 5 LOVE(AKA:SEX)songs read your juicey comments you have. So please do the THREE SOME for me. From an BIG FAN, Yami's lover (AKA-SEX TOY) P.S.-I'm a girl here who turly LOVE Yami personality and SEXY BODY. ^_^BYE My sweet Prince Yami.*****KISS***** ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: June 08, 2005 15:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why'd ya stop? It was going so wonderfully! I love Marik and Malik they're so good together as friends or lovers. Please update soon! You really didn't describe the rape scene, at least I think it's a rape scene. You don't have to write the acual motions of it but what were Malik's thoughts? He was scared out of his mind, did he yell out in the mind link or try to in real life? For Marik of course, and wouldn't Marik be just as terrified for his light. I want to see more of their emotions because it makes it seem more real. However some people perfer to do that kind of thing in flash backs so that's fine as well. Can't wait to see what comes next and what you do with it! Thank You. DK;)
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