Title: Long review
Reviewed By: Just Another Devil On: May 06, 2005 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I gave you all 10's as you may have noticed but it's not because I'm lazy it's because you really deserve it! I love Crono! (He's so cute! And he's nice *continues forever* anyway.) I think it's cool how you have Aion and Crono as brothers. Oh, and I personally hate Sabriel! She shouldn't have burnt Ranna's wings! And though the curse turned out to be and okay thing she... well I don't mind that she did that. But why's she down there now! Can't she just leave them alone?! Or is this just like free cable for her? And when it starts to get boring she can change it. I hate her! Ranna's cool though. And I agree with her (In one of the times when you were having the OOFF [Out of Fan Fiction] conversations) No Aion and Ranna pairings! No! I hate that he's jealous though! It makes me feel sad for him. Are there going to be other devils and angels in it?! New characters! But for now it's just Chrono, Aion, Sabreil, and Ranna that's okay. Anyway I read all 6 chapters in a hour so I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! I hope it answers my questions. Or question I'm not going to check and reread all this. Sorry if you think this is too long! I don't want to waste your time with my blathering! I'm sure you have much better things to do besides reading comments and writing fan fictions. Well anyway I hope you find time in your busy day to write about Crono, Ranna, Aion, and Sabreil for all of us fans out here hanging on your every typed up word! (1500 characters for your FF) |
