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"Cowboy Bebop: Insomnia" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
Reviewed By: Shmoo741 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 23:35 CDT Comment/Review: I think your story is really good. I liked the way you set up your new character and filled the reader in on her emotions and relationships with the other character. I will be looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
Reviewed By: Shmoo741 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 16:56 CDT Rating(s): Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I think this story has a really good base for plot. I like your original character Rain. I like the way you let the reader understand her, her feelings, and her relationship with other characters. There were a couple of spelling errors, but you explained that in the end, plus they weren't that serious. I enjoyed reading this chapter and think you should defenitely continue. Good Work!

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