"Longing" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 23:40 CDT Comment/Review: wow. i was figuring inuyasha and kagome, and that ending blew me away. now i'm wondering was it inuyasha? you really left the male role open to guesses. interesting.
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 02:23 CST Comment/Review: nice writing.heated too.
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Reviewed By: Kiki Ortega On: May 20, 2005 23:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Very cool. I loved it. I'm pretty sure it's InuYasha... well, because of the 'growl' and because he has denied himself the 'whatever' Miroku hasn't been even trying to deny himself.... oh, InuYasha/Sango pairings are my favorite... You're SO cool for writing this. PLEASE WRITE MORE OF THIS KIND...
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Reviewed By: Saki =) On: April 10, 2005 15:47 CDT Comment/Review: That was well written... wonder who it was though? Hopefully it was Miroku, but that line with "He opened his eyes, a soft growl rumbling in his chest" made me wonder if it was Inuyasha... sadly to say, I really hope it wasn't Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: April 06, 2005 09:25 CDT Comment/Review: *phew* bit hot in here. It isn't completely clear that this is Miroku, but I also don't see anything that would suggest it is someone else. Clearly someone that walks/travels with Sango - and because there is no demon traits, have to go with the monk... At any rate, nice job. (lol)
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 22:26 CDT Comment/Review: That was good and hot!!! I have no idea who was watching her. At first I thought it said (ruby red eyes) And was thinking the dark hottie Naraku. I looked again and it said lips. Haha!! Hmm.. could be Miroku..
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