Reviewed By: paniwi(NLI) On: April 15, 2005 10:01 CDT Comment/Review: eehm, I'm not really sure how to comment, but since I'm a fierce reviewer for every story, i guess I should...it was, well, different. I don't think that this has been done before, It's beautifully written, though I think the inpact would have been bigger if it had been in the "I-perspective". other than that, keep it up
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