| "There's no such thing as half love" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
Title: There's No Such Thing As Half Love
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: There's No Such Thing As Half Love
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 17:00 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 19:23 CDT
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I've waited so long for an update. I'm glad they had share time.
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Reviewed By: wynter89(mm) On: September 18, 2005 10:09 CDT
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ok so i am still alive. but i am still into your fic. wow it took me forever to find it again. i really cant wait for more. it almsost made me cry. i had little tears at the edge of me eyes. well i hope everything is working out for you!! good luck may kami-sama be with you
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Reviewed By: babygurl_tiff On: August 19, 2005 21:20 CDT
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when r u gonna UPDATE??? plz do it so0n...PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: babygurl_tiff On: August 07, 2005 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! i'm really enjoying it. ummm...can u plzzzz update now??? PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 10:17 CDT
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*Curses under his breath* Damn Cliffhanger....Update soon, or feel the wrath of Jaden! *Makes Thunder boom and lightnng crash*
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 01:12 CDT
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Well this relationship is a doozy! I can't wait to see what they do next.
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Reviewed By: babe_galanime On: August 03, 2005 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, dats relli good.so continue.
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Title: There's No Such Thing As Half Love
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 20:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: There's No Such Thing As Half Love
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 13:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: There's No Such Thing As Half Love
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 20:47 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Hehehe
Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an evil cliffie. But i am loving your fic and I can't wait to see more. (I don't think I have ever laughed so much during a fic). Peace out, Sakag
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Reviewed By: wynter89(mm) On: June 28, 2005 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is the boom, (i havent used that since 2000) any way i love this fic, you have to update please, wow. i am inpressed with it. i really enjoy reading it. i cant wait for the next update. what will i do if you dont (probably kill meself) not healthy thinking i know, but the fic is really good. good luck may kami-sama be with you. P.S update soon pleasssseeeee. XD
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Title: There's no such thing as half love
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 06:39 CDT
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You'll get your bearings back believe me ok. It was a good chapter and i know you will write more soon. these two together are awesome and i know you'll make then that way. So update ok...
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Title: There's No Such Thing As Half Love
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 22:03 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Sky Mrshal Oz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I think there are some problems with spelling and grammar. I know they seem pointless but they can be distracting if thier are too many of them. I think maybe a quick grammar check would do much to improve the story. Overall though it is quite enjoyable. Your story is very original and I really appreciate authors like you who seem devoted to thier stories. You may think your last chapter was not good but I disagree. It may not be perfect but I still think it was pretty good. I look forward to reading the next update soon. You keep writing and remember that whatever you write it is your story and you shouldn't let people discourage you or get in your nerves. Have a good day. -Sky Marshal Oz
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Title: ^_-
Reviewed By: Je Mlle Vous On: June 22, 2005 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Need better punctuation and such, but still good.
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Title: hey!
Reviewed By: Goten-Rockz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really quite good!...i like your whole dream sequence stuff...thumbs up" ^__^
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Reviewed By: desertblue On: May 31, 2005 14:54 CDT
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I love P\T stories and there aren't alot out there so keep writing it is a great story and showes Pan's true stuborness
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Title: There's No Such Thing As Half Love
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 12:46 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: keep it up
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I also like this couple and your story. please keep it going and update soon.
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Reviewed By: MacFukamachi On: April 22, 2005 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the premise, Trunks/Pan my favorite pairing. Love the invading dreams part. Spelling and Grammar do lack, tad distracting when reading. But overall great fanfic. Keep it up. If you need a beta reader, I would be happy to help. Update soon.
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Title: There's No Such Thing As Half Love
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 22:37 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters. Can you write this story on www.adultfanfiction.net
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Title: well....bob dude
Reviewed By: lone saiyan woman(not signed in) On: April 11, 2005 12:08 CDT
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excuse me bob-dude but wot got up ur ass, its just an abreviation ever heard of that, said give me constructive critism no just plain stupidness
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Reviewed By: Bob-dude On: April 10, 2005 12:15 CDT
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I would like to say that it was pretty nice. However, I didn't like it. If an author is not committed enough to be able to keep typing 'gravity room' they should stop typing the rest of their story as well. Don't mind my bitchiness, it's a pretty good start anyways.
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Reviewed By: bhigu On: April 09, 2005 23:16 CDT
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write more. its good. 2 lazy 2 type in full sentences.
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Title: There's No Such Thing As Half Love
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 13:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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