| "Kyoujin Bishou" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool story.
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Title: chap 5
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 12:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Kishiros Kirei Meito [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ I've been looking for a fic with Soujiro in it! YAY! *Huggles* Great job so far! I am your #1 fan now! I was going to write one too and I hoped I wasn't alone, but yay! I found this, and I feel happy. When I do write will you read mine? *puppy dog eyes* Please...? Please update soon too, and if you need help I will!
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Title: chap 1
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: Piper On: May 19, 2005 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting, hope you continue with this. I was interested in the story, the introduction of people ie) this is so-and-so seemed to take up a bit much room and not do much for the plot. The chapter cut off a bit abruptly, it seemed your writting style switched from overly descriptive to no description whatsoever. Anyhow, I do look forward to the rest of the story, as the plot is original and looks to be interesting.
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