| "Your My One and Only" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: SILerfreak On: June 16, 2005 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is freakin sweet! you have to update! now! LOL I like how they fell asleep together soo .... sweet.. ^-^ uperdate! soon!
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Title: ooooh! i likey!
Reviewed By: temtation of the soul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it. its a little differant from my normal storys but still, its a really good polt. you should continue and update...soon...
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Reviewed By: justagirl On: April 07, 2005 22:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agree with the first reviewer. But like he/she(?) said its good and promising. I like it, but i need more to go on. You have potential! avwa!(sp?) *does second reviewer dance*....not as exciting...
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: April 07, 2005 21:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
there are some issues flow, consistancy, and in some places it's confusing to the reader what exactly is happening. also, there are some glaring grammar errors that detract from the overall quality of the writing. for example your is possessive while you're means "you are". the idea is intriguing and would be better if improved and developed more. the first chapter is quick and lacks the indepth detail that often defines a great work. your story is promising and i look forward to another update.
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