| "Dio's Curious" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Eve5235 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2011 19:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sadly all you can see of Chapter 20 is... "RECAP:The two van ships soared through the sky one after the other gaining more and more speed. Lavi turned slightly to see exactly how much space there was between them. She gave a sigh of relief when she saw that their van ship was slowly pulling away from the other. She turned back around quickly when she heard Claus gasp. Her eyes became wide as she saw a large form start to materialize from the clouds. She opened her mouth and screamed "THE GUILD!" She was stunned how did they know where they had went. She bit her lower lip as Claus tried to slow down the speed of the van ship but she knew that it was already to late they had been spotted. CHAPTER TWENTY: CAPTURED" You've done an awesome job on this fanfic! When I watch the anime, all I can think about is this fanfic. lol |
Title: o.0
Reviewed By: slave_4_anime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2009 22:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
YEA really late reply but all chapters are infact there i can see them :S
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Title: Where is Chapter 20?!
Reviewed By: RealRed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your fic though I am a bit puzzled to which far-away land did CHAPTER 20 fly off to... Can't wait for the sequel!
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Title: The Missing Chapter among other things...
Reviewed By: Cardcaptor_RLH85 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 05:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the way that the first 13-14 chapters had us readers hating Dio's guts but after that we saw his true feelings for a few chapters and then we hated him all over again ^_^ My largest problems were the fact that you had quite a few spelling issues, and the missing chapter 20(which can be found on her website http://www.leala2.zoomshare.com/ by the way). However, since the spelling problems weren't numerous enough to make me stop reading, and I found the missing chapter so besides those tschnical issues I liked this story. However, I can't seem to find the sequel. FF.net has stopped alowing 'adult' material so it may have been removed could you lead us readers to where it can be found now? Thank you for the wonderful read ^_^
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Title: Missing Chapter
Reviewed By: Umeko On: August 23, 2005 05:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed your work so far. I've gotten to chapter 20, the only problem is..It's not there. The recap is there but the chapter it's self isn't. Just wanted to let you know.
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Reviewed By: just a passer-by On: April 15, 2005 15:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
and juz to add on, i stopped at chp 17..what happened behind..will read on soon.. didn't like ur earlier chapters coz i felt closing the browser at chp 3 already.
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Reviewed By: just a passer-by On: April 15, 2005 15:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
ya know..spelling and grammar..;) u're getting better with more chapters.. maybe more on descriptions of feelings and actions:)
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