| "Who's On First?" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: YuYuHakushoismyLIFE On: July 04, 2005 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, I liked the angle you used for Ed. XD Very enjoyable to read!
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Reviewed By: Plushie Heartless [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Wow, it's not often I actually LAUGH whilst reading a fanfic! Happy smile, not usually a laugh... ^_^ You rock! I have a buddy who does the exact same thing with age and height, so I'm going to print this out and give it to her! Yay!
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Reviewed By: RavenKai On: May 27, 2005 14:47 CDT
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heheheh.......how about a follow-up, one with ed on top, then consenting to 'ride' Roy?
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Reviewed By: Sinistra-san [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never read something like this. It's different and I really like it. I just hope to see more from you!
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Reviewed By: mystical_saiya666 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved it, though i kinda feel sorry for roy. but i still loved it. write more!!
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Reviewed By: yaoikitten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU TEASE ME! it was good tho... i never expected that from ed.. ok yes i did... well sorta... i guess it depends really... if my mind wants to be really dirty or not ^_~ i liked it alot tho.. i havnt found to many fullmetal fanfics.. im dissapointed... i want to read more!
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Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 20:56 CDT
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*cracks up* OMG, that was soooooo funny!!! XP Great idea -- keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: sparklerfish [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 19:37 CDT
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THAT WAS PRICELESS!!! OMFG I LOVED IT ! I WAS NEALY IN TEARS FROM LAUGHING SO DAMN HARD!
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Reviewed By: Mauztattoo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurrah for you! I've always thought that the whole top/bottom thing based on size was crap! I know enough "Butch in the streets/Bitch in the sheets" to make me laugh really hard at this! Follow it up,please? I've got a story myself in progress on FF.net under "Mauzkateer" where the male character has a similar suprise for his lover in the end. I'm probably going to start posting here too so I can let my freak flag fly! Be well.
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