| "A Weekend Interlude" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: QueenBowie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 01:29 CDT
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I like the tone of your story and I look forward to future chapters. Fluffy is such a sexy cad ... tee-hee!
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Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 22:44 CDT
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Ack! A cliffy!!! Yes, Sesshy is very sexy! I'd let him charm me all he wants, lol! This is a great story! I feel sorry for Kouga and Inu! The poor fella! Wonder if there's going to be any Kag/Sesshy action, that would be sexy (I like that word, if you haven't noticed). La la la... Update!!! Pretty please?
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Title: Ch 1-3
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 16:23 CDT
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oooo, very nice. what is he going to do? Is Inuyasha ok? Is Kouga really dead? What is Naraku up to? Does he know or care that Kagome is with the Western Lord? I think you are doing well keeping Sesshomaru-sama in character, and Kagome as well. And you haven't made Rin too cute either, for that I say, THANK YOU! (I just can't see Rin asking Kagome if she is going to be her new mom.) Please write more! I look forward to seeing this progress ^_^
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Reviewed By: MaginMan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 15:44 CDT
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I love some of the changes you have made to the chapter set up, and this current chapter was very enjoyable. I like that you thought to make the castle big enough to incorporate his dog-form; I don't think I have read a story where someone mentioned that before. You have a very interesting view of Sess, and while I disagree with your portrayal of the dog lord slightly, I like your reasons for why you think he would act that way. For the record, I would like to point out that I was saying that he COULD run around naked singing show tunes in his castle, and we wouldn't know :P. I wasn't putting in a request, but Sesshy on Crack could be entertaining :). All in all, another good chapter. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: kris one zero On: May 23, 2005 14:05 CDT
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please update i love this fanfic!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love your story idea's on this one, though I do find Sesshoumaru is "warming up" to Kagome a little to fast. In actuality it wouldn't happen overnight. But otherwise just a little OOC with him but that is normal, and I agree he is hard to write ^.^ Oh, and if I may request something, could you have more InuYoukai instincts showing in Sesshoumaru. Nothing extreme but other than that PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! From a loyal Fan ~Amaya Gin Kagome
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*n.s.i.* On: May 22, 2005 22:49 CDT
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wow. thats it. wow. please update soon. im begging you.
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: May 16, 2005 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well now we know what happened to Miroku and Sango...how come they weren't with them in the first place? What I mean is why did they split up the night before?
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Title: A Weekend Interlude
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 22:15 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: shining_princess On: April 30, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! this was sooo good! PLEASE update or i will cry!!!
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Reviewed By: MaginMan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 16:15 CDT
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Well, I am a fan so far. The plot seems thin, but the writing is well done. I put a lot of stock in grammar and spelling, and you seem to be good with both. My only compliant would be how slowly the story seems to be progressing. If more occurred each chapter, it may seem faster even if you didn't actually write more. I could see the first three parts being one chapter and the second chapter starting with Sango & Miroku. Well, I will be watching for future updates, thanks!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*logged out* On: April 21, 2005 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
back again--wow, your new chapter is really tense! i was freaking out when you said inu's organs were showing..ew! lol, well, this is really good so far!!i really like this story so far and i've added you to my favorites. pweeeease keep writing it, if you don't finish it i'll be so sad! *sniffle* so yeah....hurry up and update, woman!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet*logged out* On: April 20, 2005 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good so far....very descritptive and creative....there were minor mistakes. you're off to a good start! now im ready for the action!!!if its gonna be 4 more days till u update again i'll be sad! so PLEEEASE update!!!
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 17:30 CDT
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I think you are doing a wonderful job on this story, and pretty amazingly Sesshoumaru is wonderfully in character. At least I think so, and yeah I do agree, he is hard to write for but thats the fun part... making him do stuff he wouldn't normally do. lol.. update soon please.. good luck.
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