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Reviewed By: Inuyashas_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love your story idea's on this one, though I do find Sesshoumaru is "warming up" to Kagome a little to fast. In actuality it wouldn't happen overnight. But otherwise just a little OOC with him but that is normal, and I agree he is hard to write ^.^ Oh, and if I may request something, could you have more InuYoukai instincts showing in Sesshoumaru. Nothing extreme but other than that PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! From a loyal Fan ~Amaya Gin Kagome
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*n.s.i.* On: May 22, 2005 22:49 CDT
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wow. thats it. wow. please update soon. im begging you.
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: May 16, 2005 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well now we know what happened to Miroku and Sango...how come they weren't with them in the first place? What I mean is why did they split up the night before?
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Title: A Weekend Interlude
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: shining_princess On: April 30, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! this was sooo good! PLEASE update or i will cry!!!
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Reviewed By: MaginMan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 16:15 CDT
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Well, I am a fan so far. The plot seems thin, but the writing is well done. I put a lot of stock in grammar and spelling, and you seem to be good with both. My only compliant would be how slowly the story seems to be progressing. If more occurred each chapter, it may seem faster even if you didn't actually write more. I could see the first three parts being one chapter and the second chapter starting with Sango & Miroku. Well, I will be watching for future updates, thanks!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*logged out* On: April 21, 2005 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
back again--wow, your new chapter is really tense! i was freaking out when you said inu's organs were showing..ew! lol, well, this is really good so far!!i really like this story so far and i've added you to my favorites. pweeeease keep writing it, if you don't finish it i'll be so sad! *sniffle* so yeah....hurry up and update, woman!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet*logged out* On: April 20, 2005 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good so far....very descritptive and creative....there were minor mistakes. you're off to a good start! now im ready for the action!!!if its gonna be 4 more days till u update again i'll be sad! so PLEEEASE update!!!
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 17:30 CDT
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I think you are doing a wonderful job on this story, and pretty amazingly Sesshoumaru is wonderfully in character. At least I think so, and yeah I do agree, he is hard to write for but thats the fun part... making him do stuff he wouldn't normally do. lol.. update soon please.. good luck.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: April 16, 2005 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you update! It's a little short but that's ok. I look forward to when Kagome wakes up and everything that's happened sets in. Please update soon!
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Title: oh...wow....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 14, 2005 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao i hope Inu's ok too!!! well kepe up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: wow....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very interesting! I looks promising for a good story! Is poor Inuyasha dead?! I can't wait for the next chapter so please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Sakurakessho [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 19:04 CDT
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very intresting. I hope the next chapter comes up soon. Though, to me, it moved a little fast. Agian..it could just be me! Good though. Keep it up!
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