| "Busy Spring Break" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 21:59 CDT
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nice story... like it so far... update soon... please and thank you!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 07:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH GREAT I LOVED IT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE ASAP! WOOT!
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 06:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH GREAT CHAPTER I LOVED IT ^___^
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 07:40 CDT
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update soon please. I'd say more, but my illness is preventing it. bye!
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Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: April 17, 2005 11:27 CDT
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i loved busy lives!!! im glad ur writing a spring break version!!! there was one idea that i had... if uve ever seen the GGW comercials... inuyasha beats the crap outta the camera crew for being so sick!!!! lmao!!! (i hate those damn commercials...) well, i hope its a good idea and if it isnt, ill know y... update please!!! =^-^=
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 13, 2005 20:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. Glad to see those two were able to get a moment alone... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: FormerlyOrb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 16:35 CDT
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This is a really great sory. Throwing in the fluff was a great addition. I really want like, lobster or cod right now though. Stupid seafood. I hope you can update this, or any other stories soon. Take care!
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter! I always love it when authors decide to make sequals to their stories! Anyway, your looking for ideas for Spring Break...arn't there usually some form of an amusment park or carnival that goes on? And they all, well except Sango and Miroku, have kids, so why not a zoo as well? Anyway, keep up the great work and i can't wait to see the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 12:16 CDT
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good first chapter and intresting introduction to the characters. i think you could use a little more background as to teh couples or what not, maybe do a few chapters of flashbacks. one problem i find when writing is when vocalizing memories, it tends to be rushed rather then describing them. i dont' know, maybe its me. very good chapter though! i'm excited to see what you do next.
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Reviewed By: shorty2008 On: April 11, 2005 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!! no really! please continue!!!!!!! FOR mE??????? :( PLz!!!!
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Title: assssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Reviewed By: essies2 On: April 09, 2005 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is great
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 09, 2005 19:28 CDT
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Excellent chapter. To be honest I love the way both Inuyasha and Sesshomaru have softened somewhat, it seems that married life has been good for them both. Sango still seems to be on tenderhooks with Miroku at times but I am sure he can find a way to ease her apprehension... I really liked this and would like to see you continue if you can, I only hope that the writers block eases and whoeverit is that is making such a racket is quiet for a while so the irgrain fades. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: katt_jam On: April 09, 2005 13:20 CDT
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I'm so glad you decided to do a sequel, I was hoping that you would. Loved the first story and I just know that I will love this one as well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 11:06 CDT
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awesome start! I love the beach. Thanks for bringing us a new story!
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Reviewed By: Orb On: April 08, 2005 23:19 CDT
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Awesome chapter!! I'm so happy for this sequal, I can't wait. I hope you can't update again soon. I know this will be just as great, if not better than the previous. Take care!
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