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"KC" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Misa1120 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 07, 2005 20:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello! I'm Misa1120. I think your story is good so far. I have one suggestion, though: In later chapters, I think you should add more suspense, action, and romance between KC and a BB character (doesn't matter who). Well, that's my input! Sayonara!
 Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2005 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hi name sakota and revewing in the game (actionly its Beybladeing but you get the point) Like the story keep up the good work! Ja ne (c-ya in Japanese)

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