Reviewed By: Misa1120 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 20:04 CDT Comment/Review: Hello! I'm Misa1120. I think your story is good so far. I have one suggestion, though: In later chapters, I think you should add more suspense, action, and romance between KC and a BB character (doesn't matter who). Well, that's my input! Sayonara!
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