| "No Smooth Path to Eros" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Qui-ti On: August 17, 2005 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was surprised to find this fanfiction. Average fanfiction quality has been getting lower and lower each passing year, but this is excellent! I'm enjoying this immensely and wanted to thank you for putting the effort into making this good. You have no idea how stressful it is for me to put up with this wave of terrible fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: bobby pin On: August 17, 2005 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh, kikyou da bitch strikes again!! Uh, let's see, Inu is like almost 10 years older than 17 yr old kag, right? How would that work? Will he find some loop hole in the law to be with her? Yeah, go Inu/Kag!
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Reviewed By: Untamed Melody On: August 04, 2005 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic alot.UPDATE,UPDATE, update. Anyways will Kikyou be a bitch in this story, and if you don't mind don't make her cheat on sesshoumaru,cause thats one of my favorite pairings.Please make her and sesshoumaru have a good,non-cheating relationship.Well you writng flows really well and I can't wait o read more. Ja Ne 8)
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Reviewed By: mischievous angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 10:42 CDT
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Good story so far. I hope u update soon. I was just wondering how old is Inuyasha exactly? If Kagome's only seventeen is it legal for her and Inuyasha to be together? I think it's anything more than 4 years is illegal. Anyway enough of my babbling. Please update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: JustAReader On: May 01, 2005 14:57 CDT
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Two words: Absolutely WONDERFUL. Waiting for your next update!
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Reviewed By: inudragongoddess On: May 01, 2005 14:52 CDT
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Awesome story so far! Love the concept!! I wanna see what happens next.....update soon, please!!!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 16:43 CDT
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Well, this is unsigned because my computer doesn't seem to want to let me login and STAY logged in. Stupid. Anywho. Love your fic. Good characterization and interesting plotline, few spelling mistakes, etc. I'd be interested in being your beta. I'm an English major in college, writing is my life, and I'm a stickler for spelling, grammar, and flow. Xaenthe@sbcglobal.net
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Reviewed By: Davi Man On: April 28, 2005 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!! Just keep updating!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneFox (not signed in) On: April 27, 2005 18:41 CDT
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I love the concept! And if there's still an opening, I'd love to be your beta! I'm great with English and my vocabulary is large. I would really like to help you with your fic. If you accept my proposal then e mail me at Animesweetie2010@aol.com I'd be so happy and I'd wub you if you do! ^.^
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Reviewed By: review On: April 27, 2005 17:18 CDT
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Please update, I want to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: IceYoukaiEnchantress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 13:06 CDT
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that is soo kool!! please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: hiiii On: April 10, 2005 10:02 CDT
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I love it. Please update.
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 21:20 CDT
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please continue i luv it already!
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Reviewed By: emie On: April 09, 2005 18:27 CDT
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Great stuff! Continue!!! i love it uptill now, oh and your story should be put in the Alternate Reality, kay well update soon!
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Reviewed By: reviewing On: April 09, 2005 14:58 CDT
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This is not a 'Continuation'; it is an 'Alternate Universe'. Please correct your coding or you will be reported.
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