| "No Smooth Path to Eros" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fates my Bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 03:39 CST
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I really like this fic. YOu should really update. And what is the whole deal with Kikyo not cheating on him. He caught her with her panties in her purse. It doesn't matter if its just a one night stand! Once a cheater. Always a cheater. Make Kagome and InuYasha get together soon.
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Reviewed By: Nick F. On: October 14, 2005 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update please! :wail really loudly:
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Reviewed By: alejandra1299 On: September 11, 2005 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: miko_gurl_kagome On: August 19, 2005 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
noo sesshie don't marry the bitch cool inu kag moment. update soon!
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Title: Looks promising!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like where you're taking this. Keep writing!
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Title: Kwool
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome!!! Please update!!!
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Reviewed By: Xxcrissy_tinxX On: August 18, 2005 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow its been a looong time since i have read a great fanfic like urs!its only started n i want to read more update soooon!really good story btw!
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Reviewed By: ~Maggie~ On: August 18, 2005 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sad that there's only two chapters so far :( I really, really, really enjoy this story. I haven't seen quite this concept before and I like how Kagome is this simple girl being pulled into the rich world. I also think it was a nice twist to reel in her past experiance with the possible rape and adds to her character and help us see how she'll react. Inuyasha and Shesshoumaru's relationship is interesting and I want to see more of how the two brothers interact. Kikyo--I think there's something more behind her actions ((bsides the obvious betrayal she felt from her father)) so I wann see how she acts throgh this. And Inuyasha/ Kagome--can't wait to see what happens here! What is Inuyasha scheming?! Lol I love this story already so I hope you can get us an update soon. You're an awesome writer with a great idea for this story! Much luck and love! ^^
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Reviewed By: Qui-ti On: August 17, 2005 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was surprised to find this fanfiction. Average fanfiction quality has been getting lower and lower each passing year, but this is excellent! I'm enjoying this immensely and wanted to thank you for putting the effort into making this good. You have no idea how stressful it is for me to put up with this wave of terrible fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: bobby pin On: August 17, 2005 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh, kikyou da bitch strikes again!! Uh, let's see, Inu is like almost 10 years older than 17 yr old kag, right? How would that work? Will he find some loop hole in the law to be with her? Yeah, go Inu/Kag!
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Reviewed By: Untamed Melody On: August 04, 2005 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic alot.UPDATE,UPDATE, update. Anyways will Kikyou be a bitch in this story, and if you don't mind don't make her cheat on sesshoumaru,cause thats one of my favorite pairings.Please make her and sesshoumaru have a good,non-cheating relationship.Well you writng flows really well and I can't wait o read more. Ja Ne 8)
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Reviewed By: mischievous angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 10:42 CDT
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Good story so far. I hope u update soon. I was just wondering how old is Inuyasha exactly? If Kagome's only seventeen is it legal for her and Inuyasha to be together? I think it's anything more than 4 years is illegal. Anyway enough of my babbling. Please update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: JustAReader On: May 01, 2005 14:57 CDT
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Two words: Absolutely WONDERFUL. Waiting for your next update!
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Reviewed By: inudragongoddess On: May 01, 2005 14:52 CDT
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Awesome story so far! Love the concept!! I wanna see what happens next.....update soon, please!!!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 16:43 CDT
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Well, this is unsigned because my computer doesn't seem to want to let me login and STAY logged in. Stupid. Anywho. Love your fic. Good characterization and interesting plotline, few spelling mistakes, etc. I'd be interested in being your beta. I'm an English major in college, writing is my life, and I'm a stickler for spelling, grammar, and flow. Xaenthe@sbcglobal.net
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