Reviewed By: black haru lover On: June 07, 2005 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good, but you have to be more carefull. you left some words out and some letters out. hurry and make the rest i can't wait to read it. ^.^
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