| "Immortal Bitches" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: NONE
Reviewed By: rosalyn On: July 07, 2005 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this! Please make more like this with more long chapters though?
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Reviewed By: ShirachiChan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 18:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lmao,^-^That was a'ight.Update soon!~Haha!Whoo!I'm hyper right now^-^CHOCOLATE!
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Reviewed By: DrakeDragon1 On: May 28, 2005 17:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
awsome, just awsome
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Reviewed By: LunaGoddessOf Foxes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 19:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey I try, can't I ever please you
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Reviewed By: Riddick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 19:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
wOOt. But please, put spaces in!!! >_
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: LunaGoddessOf Foxes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 09:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm glad you approve ~Gaara~
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Reviewed By: Ice Riddick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 08:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hn. That's better. ~Gaara
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Title: whatever
Reviewed By: LunaGoddessOf Foxes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 20:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay!! I'm happy and I'm sorry about not giving the shonen jump I'll give it to you tommarow oh and I'll start chapter 7 tonight.
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Reviewed By: Chibi Rouyakan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 14:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
And "Itachi", I'm sorry. ;-; but it's just the spacing thing, right? I don't think I missed any punctuation... hmm... *goes to re-check chapters*.... Oh, and one day, when you're least expecting it, I WILL get that ring, coat, and forehead protector, just you wait. MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! *coughchokegaghack* ... I'm OK!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Rouyakan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 14:51 CDT
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RAWR. I must have gone crazy, I'm reviewing a story I beta on. ;-; wow, I must have no life... (No offense, Luna-kun) *wanders off to read more fanfics* ....... *pokes head back in* BTW, Luna, I'm working on it, 'kay? And you forgot to give me the Shonen Jump!! T-T I'm sad now...
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Title: LunaGoddessOf Foxes
Reviewed By: LunaGoddessOf Foxes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 20:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
DAMN IT!! Rouyakan I need Chapter 4. so you better E-mail it to me NOW!! as soon as you read this
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Title: lunaGoddessof foxes
Reviewed By: LunaGoddessOf Foxes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 21:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm trying can't I ever please you
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Reviewed By: Ice Riddick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 18:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE PUT PUNCTUATION IN!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S KILLING ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~"Itachi"
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Title: Critique
Reviewed By: Ice Riddick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 16:14 CDT
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Ghaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More description, and please, better punctuation. PLEASE!!!! GHAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!! Sorry, it's just making me crazy how many people have a good start, but then the grammar, and all that stuff sucks!! ~"Itachi"
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Title: LunaGoddessOf Foxes
Reviewed By: LunaGoddessOf Foxes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 19:56 CDT
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Oh it's okay no one blames you. everyone makes mistakes. and your not a bad beta your very good. I doubt anyones going to say anything, and if they do you can hurt them with your claws right.
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