| "Things Not Learned" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Happy-Roll [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really captured Ryoki's view and personality through this perspective. Overall enjoyable, and please coninue writing!
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Title: mylovemiroku
Reviewed By: mylovemiroku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 02:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you got Ryoki totally right. I heart him. In my opinion, Hatsumi needs to get it together and see the handsome hunk who's totally doing whatever she wants if she only treated him with a little bit of respect. Seriously. I bet if she just stood up for herself once in a while, their relationship would get somewhere. I can't wait to buy #10 to find out what happens. Great job.
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Title: LOOOOVE IT!
Reviewed By: trueidiot2 On: July 28, 2005 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this. I hope you write more on this or write another fic I really like your style. So pleez write more!
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Reviewed By: greengrl On: June 11, 2005 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed seeing the story from ryoki's point of. it makes me like him a lot better and understand were he is coming from. your style of writing is very casual and i like it but im not sure if this is how ryoki would talk. he has a more distant personality. my overall rating is 9 because of the grammer.
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Reviewed By: rejected_requisite [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 20:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
This small fiction captured Ryoki's thoughts and feelings quite well. From a reader's point of view, it seems that he is very selfish and a bit manipulative in order to achieve his goals. Through this small look on how and why he acts this way, it allows a new outlook toward his character to be made.
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Reviewed By: CallMeKit On: April 28, 2005 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wonderful little tidbit! Do write more fic! There aren't enough Hot Gimmik ones out there! -Kit
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