"Undercover" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: babygurl_tiff On: December 05, 2005 21:24 CST Comment/Review: UPDATE!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! this is getting really intense!
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Reviewed By: babygurl_tiff On: August 23, 2005 02:40 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: update!!! please!!! i wanna read what happens next!
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Title: Hmmm Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 19:00 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You're story is getting sad but it's still really good. So update soon. Kay?
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Title: Undercover Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 03:38 CDT Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Mortem [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 23:51 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: T.T ...I love your story but it's so sad now. *cries*-- Anyway, I hope you update soon!!
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Title: OOOH Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 01:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I haven't reiewed you in a while 'cause I was on a trip for two weeks with no computer access. Any ways, I have just gotten a lot more interested in this fic because of the transformations and all. Also, your Lemon was pretty good for it being your first one. Keep up the great fic and update it as soon as you can. Peace out, Sakag
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Title: Eh heh Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 20:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I know I reviewed you already, but I just came up with a new thought/suggestion for later in the story(I was thinking of Girl Got Game sort of) I thought it would be interesting if Pan had to share a room with some cute boy but he finds out her secret while she is in the shower. What he would do wold be all up to you. If you don't like it, it's okay because it's your story, not mine. Peace out, Sakag
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Title: Hmmm Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 13:40 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The preview was very interesting, but I still like your story anyways and I can't wait until you update again.
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Title: I like Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 21:21 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I am really enjoying your fic so far. I can't wait 'til the next chapter is up.
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Reviewed By: babalu2 On: May 28, 2005 00:04 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: i think this is a great story and i REALLY hope that u keep updating, please continue???...
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