| "Could This Get Any Worse?" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: shadow star 666 On: June 28, 2005 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo.. i liked that one. ^_^ good chapter. very very sad about inuyasha's mother. very sad.
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Title: Good work
Reviewed By: chibiruler1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i think you did a really good job making the story interesting but there are a few thinks in my opinion that you still need to work on.....ok first i didnt know if kagome is a demon....vampire.....human...... i didnt catch that. i also didnt like the way you detailed (greatly) on the clothes those the demons were wearing. I mean i onisty skiped that because i want to use my imagination to know what they are wearing. But reather then that i think this is a kick a** story and i cant wait for the next chapter to come out......o and sorry if you really didnt want to know about any of that up there ijust thought you should know... ^-^
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
little confusing but still assume. i love it. i scared to know who going to die though. :( i can't wait for you to update next! ~Shadow
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Title: GRAND!!!
Reviewed By: Arina On: May 12, 2005 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome awsome awsome!!!!!! i love this story its sooooo goooooooood!!!!!!! (>^-^)>
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Reviewed By: Josie n the Pcats [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent stoy. It had me hooked from the moment I started readinf it. Please continue and I'll be watching for the next update! ^_^ BTW - What are the pairings for this fic? Because, I'm a straight Inuyasha/Kagome fan.....
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