Reviewed By: Kieri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 11:41 CDT Comment/Review: This fic isn't as bad as you think. It does a good job of portraying ChiChi's feelings without being overly morose or angsty. Knowing you'll always take second place isn't an easy thing to live with, but she's managed to make the best of a sad situation. Life goes on, and so did she. The only suggestion I could make is that it seems a little long, but the lyrics don't interfere with the flow at all. Nicely done.
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