Reviewed By:newkid [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 15:41 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: Nicely written... very interesting... though the typo is a bit hard to get the words you're putting in the story... very originated... keep up the good work... oh, I want to know what happens next.... XD
Reviewed By: Chelsie On: April 11, 2005 21:34 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: This is a very well writen piece of work. I find the detail you give of the characters very descriptive and pleasent. good Job. Keep doing what you do best!
