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| "Lust and Corruption" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: PlatinumStrange
Reviewed By: PlatinumStrange [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm...does this site even update anymore? i really want to know what happens next. PLZ UPDATE!!!
| Title: Good start
Reviewed By: TorvusAgon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed what's been written so far, and I like the plan for the next chapters. I hope it's continued soon, there aren't nearly enough adult OMG fics in my opinion.
| Reviewed By: Lord Rance [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 17:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
You're already at the right track, and having Belldandy getting her vengeful streak because of Keiichi's betrayal is a very good idea. Belldandy 'uses' Ran for her own gains, and ended up getting corrupted into his side instead? Cool. Continue that thread, and don't falter from it. I'd suggest having Ran and Belldandy, the 'changed' Belldandy, together. It would be ironic for Ran to fall in love with his assignment, and Belldandy to fall in love with the cause of her torment. I can never get enough of Ranma and Belldandy being together as a couple, since it's the same as having Ranma and Kasumi in a relationship. If you need any help, PM me at the handle name "chaotic_rance" using YM.
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