Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
By far one of the most original Hiei/Kurama fanfics I have ever read. This story was really cute and it was nice to see an interpritation on what would happen to Kurama when he passed on... I think the only thing that kind of squicked me out about this story, was the elderly form of Shuichi getting it on with Hiei... Sorry but it was just a little too odd for my tastes. That and your paragraph and sentence structures are a little off, but other than that this was pretty well done.
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