| "Dystopian Story of Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: inuyasha lov3r [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 16:00 CDT
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Oh my god that was a great story! I love how Sesshomaru had a mate before Kagome! He is like a tortured soul now its just so romantic! Its so wonderful! I can't wait for you to finish writing this story! Keep up the good work! Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Akonia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoying this story I hope you write more to this soon, I want to find out what going to happen next, ah im ghessing theres gonna be a love triangle thing going on with Inu and sess and kagome its already showing through just got to wait for her to figure it out lol I'm wondering what Inuyasha's gonna do his got his own problems with his Fiance and his feeling for Kagome talk about sticky, on top of that sess and his dead wifes haunting memory and him trying to rememder that Kagome is not her, will he learn to care about kagome with out looking at her and seeing his wife I'm looking forward to seeing how to tackle this issues in the story
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 18:09 CDT
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its definitely has potential , please update I would love to see where this story is going
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Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sure hope Sess realized in that moment that he was kissing Kagome and not his dead wife (sorry couldn't remember her name) For some reason I couldn't adjust to the flow in this story until this last chapter. (Maybe I've been reading too much fanfiction).
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Title: Dystopian Story Of Lovers
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 20:14 CDT
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oh my god i can not believe you have only had 9 now 10 reviews. thsi is awsome and you ahve to keep writting. if only for my sake. pls im begging you update soon.
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Title: Dystopian Story Of Lovers
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 00:39 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: inu
Reviewed By: Teela [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why did you spell it all weird it confueses my small mind but i love the fic keep updating =^_^=
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Title: hehehehehehehehe
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 16, 2005 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea i've got a cat and a dog so if you have a roommate then you must have-been or are in college right? how intersting!!! ^__^ well keep up the good work and update again soon please? i really really really like this so far!!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: HevensAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 14:49 CDT
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HOW COULD YOU STOP!!??!!??!!??!!??!! *not blinking* *friends back away slowly* UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Angel Waters
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!!! please update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 21:42 CDT
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please write more, this is really interesting. I normally dont like fics that take place in Kag's time, but this looks good! I will be checking back on this one!
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 21:42 CDT
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please write more, this is really interesting. I normally dont like fics that take place in Kag's time, but this looks good! I will be checking back on this one!
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Reviewed By: HevensAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 17:21 CDT
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OMG! This is sooooooooooo good!!! *Adds to favorites* I'm wondering what 'that scent' is... hm... *Watches E Mail unblinking* Please update!!!!!!!! My eye sight depends on it!!! ~Angel Waters
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK I CANT WATE TO FIND OUT WHATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT!!! SORRY I WOULD WRITE MORE BUT MY CAT JUST WOT LEAVE ME ALONE I'M LIKE HER BIG PILLOW!!! WELL UPDATE AGAIN SOON PLEASE?
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