| "It Takes All Kinds" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Person named Bri On: August 20, 2005 23:39 CDT
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They aren;t canon persay. I'd say it's more like one-sided yaoi because Shinobu doesn't seem into him that way. I LOVE the pairing, dun get me wrong and I WISH tehy got tigether but... yeah, Life's not fair.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner (Not signed in) On: April 18, 2005 03:05 CDT
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You have the most elegant and amazing way of describing things that I have ever seen. You tok something that should have been a regular old piece of smut and made it quite beautiful. I think you are a fantastic writer and should keep up with more good works in the future. PS: I am not complaining about the lack of "butt sex" to be honest if you had put it in there I think it would have taken away from the beauty of the story.
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Reviewed By: Red_Rose_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 14:11 CDT
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Thank God I'm not the only SI fan out there! It's so under appreciated... Anyways, I like the story. Though I'm not the biggest lover of PWPs, this one was ok. If I had been wroting the story, I would have included a little more dialouge and description before the sex. I think Shinobu would have been just a LITTLE more apprehensive and need a LIITLE more assurance. But I didn't write it, you did. Just keep that in mind for next time, kay? Sometimes even a PWP needs a little more than just to people hopping into bed. But I think you've got potential, so keep it up! ^_^
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