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| "My Heart, My Soul, My Little Sister" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ] | Title: huh?
Reviewed By: laichi16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(silence...shock) ...Well, Kagami DID cuddle up VERY close to Kaguya when he hugged her... (thinks back on the hugging scene in the dugeon) Oh, yea, and he did kiss her, and she kissed him back before they ran away from the travelers. So, this story makes sence to me in a morbid way, but hey; you did a great job putting the foundation down, putting the story together, and overall, it was great. Be proud of yourself!
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