Title: Your story Reviewed By: dvwii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 17:53 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: I like the story so far. It has potential. I hate saiyans though, so yeah.. Screw them. uh, keep it coming. ill continue reading.
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