| "The Last Girlfriend" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: VELGMA IDIOTES SUPREAM On: May 17, 2007 10:09 CDT
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Reviewed By: FUCK VELGMA On: May 17, 2007 10:05 CDT
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Reviewed By: naraku DERAS On: May 17, 2007 10:02 CDT
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 20:48 CDT
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I'm only on Chapter Five, but your story has me empathizing, ridiculing, and bursting out into short fits of laughter, all in turn. I love Sango's sense of humor. Very nice. Happy writing! ~Xaenthe
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Title: This is really 7 reviews in 1
Reviewed By: Luna Chick (nsi) On: April 26, 2005 20:27 CDT
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I would have written seven more reviews if it wasn't that I had to read the last seven chapters in one sitting. I've been so busy that I hadn't gotten the chance to keep up with your updates. So far so good. I would like Miroku's perverted nature to come out a little more. You only have his wise monk rutine down packed. The biggest torture for K would be that everyone leaves Inward Bound with someone, or satisfied, except him. He obviously doesn't get it, or doesn't want to get it. Not getting Sango will be bad enough, but imagine his embarrassment when she flatly turns him down...I can see her saying something like, It was a physical thing, and the flame has burned out. I don't want your dick, thankyou very much.
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 17:51 CDT
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Dr. Pervert? *Laugh* Hehee! *Gives Kuranosuke a death glare* Grr.... *Hime did a sweatdrop and poke Veglma* Hime: Hey! Look you can give the author ideas to torture Kuranosuke! SWEET! How about having him see Miroku and Sango kiss! Or have Miroku ask for Sango for her hand in marriage. ^_^ Hime: or... have whathisname? Jakotsu flirt with him. .....Jakotsu isn't even over there.... at lest I don't think so. >.>
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 16:24 CDT
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Welcome Miss! ^_^ Just kidding about the Miss part... Maybe. >.> Hm... Well, It look like Sango and Kuranosuke are done.... YAY! ^_^ *Read the last part of the chapater* ...Interesting. *Cries* I am the only one that really read and reviewing here at Meidaminner... Wah! Hime: ....Er...
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 18:14 CDT
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Aw... They didn't do the jog. >.>. Hime:... I am start to wonder when she fall out of love(or lust. >.>) Kuranosuke and in love with Miroku? Meh... It going to happen soon or later. *look at the author* AYE! AYE! Capt! >.> *Grin*
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Title: Last review mistakes
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 18:13 CDT
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*smack her forehead* Bah.... I forgot to spell describing and minute. *sweatdrop*
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Title: Chapter 11 and 12.
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 18:08 CDT
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Chapter 11: *Had fall asleep in the first mintues of descieing Kuranosuke* Zzzz.... *Hime jumps on her head* Hime: HEY! Miroku has show up! *Open her eyes and start to read again* ...Runder? Bwhahahah!!!!!!!! Hm... So Miroku and Sango are going on a jog tomorrow... Interesting. Chapter 12: ..... >.>... It getting hot in here... Methinks. >.> Hime: ... NO! Don't smoke! Er...*cover her eyes* Hime: It well get better in a bad way? Um.. >.>
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Title: Chapter 10.
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 20:26 CDT
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Miroku is a psychologist? ...Is he going to act like his nomarl self? Meaning is he going to act somewhat pervert like? *laugh to herself* Soon Sango will stop thinking of Er... What his name? Hime:....Kuranosuke. Thank you, Hime... now back to what I left off.. and start to think of the lovable pervet(*laugh* I can't belive I said that... :P). If I have to... I will review almost all the other chapters... just so I can read what the heck you will do for Miroku's entrance. >.> Yay! Miroku is going to show up next chapter. *dance* ... Did this review make any sense. >_
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Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 19:27 CDT
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Heh...So Miroku is going to show up soon... This is going to be good. *Grins*
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: Luna Chick (nsi) On: April 14, 2005 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story today, while I was looking for something else. Your summary caught my eye, probably because I just broke up with my boyfriend, and going through something similar to whaat Sango went through (in my case, they seem to leave after 3 months). I read it in one sitting. The only issue I have is the Japanesse joke, they go over my head. Other than that, it was a great story, and I hope you update soon. I definitely can't wait for Miroku to come into the story, and I'm usually an Inu/Kag girl, so you are doing something right.
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