| "Cross" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Ducky Wucky Woo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 19:04 CDT
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Wow...I cant believe I found this fic O.O I Read it, like...a year ago, But I stopped because I tyhought it was gettinglemony and was too shy to read that kinda stuff..I just happened to find it on accident today XDD Wow, braught back memmories...
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Reviewed By: LSR_7 On: January 28, 2003 22:03 CST
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Had to comment about Japanese style bath tubs and baths. The room the bath tub is in is separate from the room a toilet is in. Also sinks are generally in a sub-room (?) before the bathroom.
When you take a bath you wash yourself on the tiled floor next to the bath tub and clean yourself fully before you enter the tub. The tub is very deep, you can sit up in it and the water will reach your chin. You normally do not drain the water until after a few uses because water is precious and it takes a lot to fill a Japanese bath tub. To keep it hot and to keep it from steaming away a cover is rolled on when not in use.
I miss them! |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune On: October 30, 2002 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BWAhahAhAhah! i read this last chapter and laughed real hard. my brother is stairing at me as if I was an alien.....*sweatdrop* oh well!
GREAT fanfic i really liked it! PLEASE WRITE THE REST!!!!!!!!!!!! ( Sorry my spelling is so bad! ) |
Reviewed By: LSR_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 15:30 CDT
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Poor Lantis, my face aches now even though I've never shaved my face before. A girl shouldn't have to.
I would never have imagined him being that clumsy, very funny. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: KAt On: March 17, 2002 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv umi/eagle coupling and the story is cute ^_^ please write some more |
Reviewed By: NorthStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2002 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLL GO ON GO ON GO ON GO ON GO ON GO ON GO ON GO ON GO ON GO ON GO ON GO ON GO ON !!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Umi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2001 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to use more description and not rely so much on dialogue. I have just read Chapter 1 so far and it's pretty good. Just not enough description of anything.
And Cefiro should be spelled Cephiro. At least in my experience.
Also, a good deal of typos. I'm assuming from the way you talk in your chap. sums you aren't the best typist ever. Consider getting a beta-reader. I'd offer, but I have a good deal of people I have to preread for as it is, plus I have some of my own stuff to actually write. |
Reviewed By: Emeraude On: September 13, 2002 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked a lot all the ideas and the funny things you're adding to it!!! KEEP GOING!!! |
