Reviewed By: C On: April 22, 2005 10:07 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I really rather enjoy reading this, and since i didn't expect to enjoy it at all the fact i got hook on it was quiet a shock. Its a story from a rather unique point of view, and it leaves plenty of room for development as the characters react to one another. My biggest problem is with Ryoko, to begin with she seemed worried about her little partner, but then suddenly switch to hostility, and its a change in character that i can't quite relate to ryoko or understand the reason for, but i guess this will probably be address as the story progresses
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