Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It worked... I really felt myself being pulled into Vegeta's nightmare, and the way you described the spontanious actions and changes of setting really drew me into the story. What I mean is; the dream was dream-like, make any sense? Y'know, didn't make sense, and yet.. did.. I don't know! All I know is that this was an amazing one-shot, and you've left me dying for more! I really think you could and should make this into a continuation.. but then again, I'm not so sure, the fic as a one shot suits the story.. random and strange, no real explanation... I'm not sure if you understand anything I'm saying, I can't really explain myself in words today. I just want to say that I read this fic and I thought it was great. You're a really talented writer. I wonder if you have any other works?
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