| "Hiei, The Man Behind The Mask" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: dark_heart [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like it so far! never thought of hiei with a family, really. creative!
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Reviewed By: animewolfgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very good. update soon
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Title: Kool
Reviewed By: DamnBlackHeart On: July 03, 2005 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty darn good fic so far. I hope you'll write more to the story soon. Once I started reading the story I've became draw to it. It's very interesting on how the way you started it off. I'm not sure but is this a sequel from another a story you wrote? Because it does sound like it picks off after a story. I'm guessing it is. Either way I like it so far. Keep writing!
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Title: okay....
Reviewed By: Kiche Minamoto On: June 08, 2005 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first when I read this I thought it was a sequel to another story you wrote, but I'm wrong. I like this story, and feel lucky because this is the first yyh fic I've ever read on the internet. Shut up if you're laughing!!!
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: italiannproud [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most unique fanfic I have read yet. I truly love how you have just picked up after Hiei has a family. It really gives the story a twist. All I ask is that you keep Hiei in character. I don't mean by making him emotionless, but keep him Hiei. I love what you've done and can't wait for you to finish!
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Reviewed By: Valaska On: May 08, 2005 11:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
That story is so cool so far! I hope you can write more soon!!!! :)
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Title: Yeah!!
Reviewed By: Niko-yasha (Not Logged in) On: May 07, 2005 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M IN A CHAPPIE!! ^-^ VICTORY!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rilly like this fic please continue it soon
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Title: reveiw
Reviewed By: Natsumi-Chan aka Natalie On: April 22, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Wow! Great start so far on the story! make more make more! there's so much mystery in the story and i totally love it! hope ur next chapter is out soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Tainted Insight On: April 15, 2005 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice idea there. Just a word of advise. If you're gonna do flashbacks, keep them short. Nobody likes a long flashback.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Yukiko_Of_The_Unknown [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah, first review! I like it, but maybe you could try making the chapters a bit longer, I know I'm picky. I feel bad. But it's still very good.
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