| "Shattered Soul: Chronicles of her Misery" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: nnhallfrogg1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2010 22:00 CDT
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I just started at this sight early this year or late last year... not sure. But I can't tell how much I enjoy reading your story! I actually have it on my favorites and I always come back to it.
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Title: fine.
Reviewed By: Tikal(Not loged in) On: August 19, 2005 06:49 CDT
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it's a fine story indeed. i like it. Asuka is most like Jun's daughter, and half sister or something to Jin. But since Jun is the only one to be able to put the devil gene at bey, and Asuka can too, she is defenatly related to jun, there fore is related to Jin. But she doesn't have the devil gene so she can't be related to Kazuya. that's my theory. i am still researching. nice fic.
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Title: For the next chapter
Reviewed By: Ko On: August 05, 2005 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... I kinda enjoy reading stuff when I'm not doing anything :D and I just came across this fanfic... Heh, you know in Tekken 5. There's this Asuka person, I know this isn't related to this and stuff.. but yeah.. haha... is she related to jin in anyway? and and and put asuka innn :D
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Reviewed By: kigeki On: May 19, 2005 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i´m not very good in reviews but there it goes... I like your fic it´s diferent from others that i've read, i like it but i think that you should tell when you chage the point of view, Exemple: ~~jin's view~~ or something like that... Well now i just have to wait for de next one ^^
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