| "The Centre" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Azelle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 01:57 CDT
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How odd... seriously though -- I wondered if you'd gave up on this story not a few hours ago while I was thinking of on-going stories that I had been reading since joining the IY fandom (and wished would update), and here you've gone and updated! YAY! Very nice, as usual, but I can't wait for the action. :D
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Azelle [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 07:39 CDT
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A bit late reviewing this time, but I liked the newest chapter! It definitely raises some questions that I can't wait to be answered! I have no idea why people on this site don't seem to review stories, and granted, for most, I don't normally review EVERY chapter, but your's are certainly noteworthy. :D
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Azelle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 23:26 CDT
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For not planning things out, you certainly have a knack for writing good stories! I love the whole process of the ceremony, but with it's complexity, I wonder how many bonds either never get done/completed or that unravel with time... Hm. But anyway, I absolutely love where this is going, even if it doesn't necessarily have a defined direction!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: June 26, 2005 21:55 CDT
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interesting. looking forward to the next chapter. hope you update quickly.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 17:25 CDT
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Hmmm. You've gotten me wondering what evil deeds Naraku is training these kids for. Very IC that Kagome doesn't let Inuyasha walk over her despite her crush. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Title: Me, again!
Reviewed By: Azelle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 16:48 CDT
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Very nice chapter! I love the suspense, but don't keep us waiting too long for part two! I'd love to read how Inuyasha reacts and what process is involved with the Bonding. :D
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Azelle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 05:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you've definitely gotten my interests piqued! You simply have some of the neatest ideas and the abilities with which to write them in a highly enjoyable manner. Just added this story and yourself to my favorites list. Can't wait for more, so I hope your Muse stays on speaking terms with you!
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Reviewed By: skne On: May 04, 2005 22:17 CDT
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I must admit, I'm quite impressed. This seems to be an interesting take on the "school story." I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Davi Man On: May 02, 2005 11:37 CDT
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Good so far but there is one thing you should note, in the title, "Centre" looks like it is spelled wrong, shouldn't it be "Center" or am I wrong?
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Reviewed By: mans On: April 17, 2005 23:25 CDT
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Good start! Keep it up :)
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