Title: bad language
Reviewed By: Xeshitha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it, but. the language (cussing) i couldn't stand it's like...being surrounded by a group of stuck up teenaged girls. i think if anyone is gonna make an inuyasha fanfic thing, they should at least be close on the characters. Kagome was so far off, i felt like i was reading some published teenager book. and not a good one, yet this one was still good. Sesshoumaru you were close enough on, just like the last one. you seem to like to pair Sesshy and Kago up. (you need to put htat hting up that says the story is for ages over 12. none under 13)
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